white-list re-submission i bet you it will fail

Non Bender Posts : 6 Join date : 2013-12-22

Minecraft Account Name: drakonhades

How old are you?: 15 4/18th
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: im and Aussie so yeah the eastern standard time i think

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: dpened on what kind of role playing yo mean ;)i know alot you got to stick to character its like acting and acting cool i like it

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:
its outside knowledge that you use to play a game/ RP. for example i know how to make a sword in mine craft so i an use this knowledge i have gained from the mine-craft wiki and use it in the game(assmuing making a sword is hard to do and you need to look it up)

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: if its the same rules as your original avatar rp i understand

Do you promise to abide by said rules, This includes the Server, and Forums: i am good i have been on almost all your servers and have never been banned

How much do you know about the Avatar Series?: what dont i know in my spare time i read wikipedia pages on random shows and avatar is one of them. did you know kya from the new series is the only know water benderr born from an air bender
What is your characters name,and age?: grey matsui
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What nation is your character apart of?: water tribe

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):
he when he was 6 when to the ember island and during one of the plays the theatre gets caught on fire he managed to save his little brother but not his parents. when going home the boat gets attacked by a spirit and he loses is brother all alone he has to face the troubles of the world.
now a days he nomatically travels from place to place he can never go to ember island the pain is to much for him.however he believes the ember island fire was a set up because his parents are political figures and he will not rest until he finds the man with the Q shaped scar on his back. when retuning to him northern water tribe home he found the Q shaped scar man is really his twin brother and during a fight to the death grey beat his twin. (happy now guy who criticised my back story(by the way i don't like you knight guy you haver made my list)) he now has to face the reality of his twins death and has truly never healed from not having any family

Insert and image of your minecraft skin here! (A ssreen shot in F5 mode NOT the actaual skin!): do i have too i am gonna change it if i get on

Ok so, it's apparent you need help. Since I see no staff members helping I will

First, Your Meta-Gaming definition is a little off. (yes it's correct, but not in the sense of Roleplaying.)
Two, you are missing your Power-Gaming definition.
Three, Your biography is extremely unrealistic, If you were six when a theater gets set on fire, how could your little brother (younger than 6) be the cause of it, and you also stated that your little brother died, so how can he be the man with a Q shaped scar.
Four, your biography doesn't always have to be tragic, try starting from scratch, presumably something a little less typical (ex: Family killed by Bandits, assassins, etc.) Maybe you grew up on a small farm, and when the time came you decided to travel the world for adventures. It doesn't matter, but it must include your character, and his history.
Five, your character must be atleast 18 years old when starting on the server, you can change it later once you've been accepted.
Six, It Is a Must that you include your minecraft skin, because if it is not rp'ly realistic, than you will not be able to play on the server.
Seven, Have fun when making your app! It can be really enjoyable, and take your time!

Non Bender Posts : 6 Join date : 2013-12-22

you make some good points. and i also thought you needed a tragic backstory

You don't need a tragic back story, unless you really, really want to make one. However if you do make it tragic it has to be quite good since its a cliché and we often read back-stories that are just rubbish.
Good luck with your next application. Smile

Non Bender Posts : 6 Join date : 2013-12-22

im going to re-do most of it

Denied

I've told you everything you need to know to create a successful app. This app will be denied, and I hope you will get it next. Feel free to message me on skype if you need any help Good Luck!

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